Succubus Abilities Page - Requiring proof read...

[Akasha]

I've put the last few touches on the Succubus Abilities page and am now seeking feedback, critique, suggestions and proof reading from anyone who's willing.

You'll find the new page here ( http://wowmb.net/index.php?page=Succubus_Abilities ) and for now you'll have to use that link until I get the front page finialised. Please let me know all thoughts, both good or bad and point out any errors.

[Lazyslothboy]

"It has a 12-second cooldown that can be reduced to 6 by the Improved Lash of Pain talent"

Maybe you should mention that it could have a 9 sec cool down if you only put one point in Improved Lash of Pain.

A level 70 Soothing Kiss has a 10% attack speed reduction for 10 sec for the opponent.

Everything else seems ok to me

[Akasha]

Thankyou, both updated.

[Lazyslothboy]

only complaint is that I think the level 70 soothing kiss is a little funny worded.

"Reduces the Succubus's threat & decreases melee attack speed by 10% for 10 sec."


Kind of sounds like she is losing her own attack speed. Probably is just me though.

[Akasha]

I had a play around with it, however any longer and it wraps around the next line and throws everything out of wack. I'll have another look at it tonight if my brain wakes up /curses parter for bringing home a "bug"